DESIGN RESEARCH DISSERTATION / FINAL COMPILATION
Chen Nan / 0363533
Design / Bachelor of Design (HONS) in Creative Media
Design Research Dissertation: Final Compilation
Task 3: Visual Publication
The content of the discussion is 5.1. 5.0 should be the theme content or background introduction.
5.1 makes what kind of packaging design has been studied.
The next two parts can be 5.2 and 5.2.1 to discuss the research problem, which may be the use of color or color and emotion. When 5.3, you can discuss your second question, the balance between color and culture.
Correct the incorrect usage of words and document format in the article.
The problem in question 1 should be solved immediately in 5.2. The title of 5.2 is inappropriate. It should be changed to "Appropriate use of color on packaging design in the context of culture."
When showing examples, products that match the local cultural colors should be used. The examples used are incorrect. The correct packaging needs to be selected, which represents the colors of the local culture.
Recommended to study question 1 in depth.
Delete "brand" in the title, Because what I need to talk about is packaging..
Using the example of "red envelope" is incorrect, "product packaging" should be used instead.
Add examples of product packaging that discuss regional culture.
The discussion direction is clearer.
There is no primary data, so I need to put in my survey to support the discussion content.
If the word count of 5.0 discussion is too short, it is recommended to explain what is traditional culture and what is regional culture. Add more examples.
Research methods need to show results.
Check the font size of the image numbers
Complete section 6.0
The second paragraph of the Conclusion part introducing the research method is too long, so delete the example.
There are two more parts that need to be written: Limitations of the research and Project Recommendation for Future Research.
For the Abstruct part, it is incorrect. It needs to be described based on Research problem, research methodology, findings, discussion and conclusion.
There are too many colors, you can choose one or two.
Graphic design can combine culture with color.
The first idea of font combination may work.
The name and email format are incorrect.
The picture position is not as required.
Add your own research questions and research objectives.
The Methodology section cannot place images; it places required images in Appendices.
It took me a lot of time to complete this research paper, but fortunately, I had completed the data collection in the last semester. When writing the paper, I needed to find more secondary sources, not just those in the design research method submission. I found it challenging to find research and data related to the paper, especially through online resources. However, the assignments in the module gave enough time so that I didn't feel rushed to complete the tasks. When writing the draft of the paper, I spent most of my time on writing the discussion section. Thanks to Dr. Jinchi's guidance, I was able to successfully complete the final paper from the draft stage and complete other tasks. I am very grateful to Dr. Jinchi for providing critical feedback on my work during the tutorial.
In the process of completing these tasks, I realized that I was lacking in research and writing skills. I deeply realized the importance of research in writing papers, and also realized that writing skills are crucial in expressing research results clearly, conveying ideas, and avoiding plagiarism. In addition, I learned how to conduct a comprehensive research around a topic, including the necessary steps from finding relevant data to adopting research methods to analysis and discussion.
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